Tuesday, September 18, 2007

Speed Haiku

I wrote this a few days ago while brushing my teeth:

Cinnamon toothpaste
You make it hard to notice
If gums are bleeding

8 comments:

OldLady Of The Hills said...

LOL, LOL...Very cute! And true, too I guess....I've never seen cinimmon toothpaste...Didn't even know they had anything like that...OR, did you make that up? Whatver....Very Very cute!

Anonymous said...

when you haiku
I get blue
and want to do
something similar

Shephard said...

Ok... I didn't see that comin'. lol
Clever.

Yeah, I hear ya on the CD case thing. WTH?

HAPPY DAYS is very cute and fun. My only complaint at the time was that every single character had a song and it was overlong. But I bet they've been trimming. I hope your Pinky is a redhead...ours was a brunette, and I was like...wth? We saw it try out in Gary Marshall's theatre here in LA. :) You'll have to tell me what you think of it. Ours was hilarious, partially because of Paul Vogt (now playing Edna in Hairspray).

~S :)

Anonymous said...

I have the Same problem on the gums thing!
Cool Haiku though.
Michele sent me to check out what you've been doing- I was reading further & now I miss my denim jacket! I also wanted to mention my kids were rather appalled at the Muppet show too!

-E said...

HAHA. My dentist once told me you should brush until your gums bleed every time.

I don't use cinnamon toothpaste though.

Michele sent me, have a great weekend. Happy Brushing!

Anonymous said...

Alright that is a fabulous haiku. It's almost better than the laughing haiku:
ha ha ha ha ha
ha ha ha ha ha ha ha
ha ha ha ha ha

In regards to the comment you left on my spot earlier. If you have any design ideas then please drop them in comment form over at my blog. I am looking for some inspiration and seem to be hard pressed mostly jst because I am so busy. Let me know. There were a few that you mentioned and I"m already going to try and do those so if you have anymore muse just lying around throw some my way if you dont mind.

Anonymous said...

Ahhhh geeeezzzz...now I gotta go Wikapedia "Haiku" (as if I didn't already have ENOUGH to do)

BreadBox said...

I think that you should send the haiku to the Simpsons -- it sounds like something they'd use on an advertisement during the Itchy and Scratchy Show.....

Michele sent me,
N.